Thursday, July 30, 2009

tuim wine-bottle -
snail
fir a cork




empty wine-bottle -
snail
for a cork

9 comments:

  1. Hope it had some fun ;-) I did!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. in its own way mcdonald san

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  3. ha! i had to laugh at Ralf's comment...Was it red wine -- i'd have loved to have a sip :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. I had fun too!
    Nice!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  6. Typos ...

    Me again. John, I would like to use one of your haiku in a haibun (as a quotation, by telling your name). I don't know your mailing adress, so I'd like to give you mine: ralf(at)broeker-online.de.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. Top one. I love it. I can imagine a whole insect / animal story. Who opened the bottle, who drank it, who re-corked it!

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