the last line sent a chilly shiver in me! God knows why! anyway, good haiku John :)wishes, devika
Lovely John, one to read again and again.
...even the nano-weight of the petal... is felt. Fine one John. _m
The pool is a symbol for wealth and/or an erotic promise. In your haiku it is just the surface for a big thing: human emotion. Very good, John.Best wishesRalfPS: The verification word at the moment is "stones". Sometimes I think these systems know what we think: why not throwing a pebble into this still pool and watching circles?
took me back to Basho's frog leapmuch lovegillena
"...even the nano-weight of the petal... is felt..." So true, Magyar!Best wishes,Angelika
you have a fine eye, John. what grace you have been given to see the tenderness of life with such understanding.
This is one of those 'don't breath or you'll break it' haiku. Beautiful!