Thursday, July 02, 2009

deid i the girse
a bummer - its weengs
gildin ma fingers




dead in the grass
a bee - its wings
gilding my fingers

9 comments:

  1. I can feel that, John
    and a kindness in the words,


    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I meant to say I could feel the kindness in your words, John

    devika

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  3. i agree with Devika.

    such intimacy.

    www.laure01.blogspot.com

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  4. nice one John,
    catching some of the magic.

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  5. We have to have the heart to feel. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. I would love to hear the sound of this ".../... - its weengs/gildin ma fingers"!

    A good haiku!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  7. A magical moment John...

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  8. nice one John - 'gilding' is a good touch

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