Friday, July 10, 2009

gentie deuk -
aneath the scruif
radge paiddlin




elegant duck -
beneath the surface
furious paddling

7 comments:

  1. I wish I could hear the Gaelic lines now. When I try to speak that loud I've got the fear to prounce it totally wrong. On the other side: great break between line one and three.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. This made me laugh, John :)
    infact, anyone/anything furious makes me smile or laugh...not always, though :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. this is nice; the ripples on the water intimated

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  4. A nice contrast between the calm of the exterior and the uncertainty etc within...

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  5. i could not agree with Frank more. how what is seen often belies what is not. for some reason i just now thought of synchronized swimmers as elegant ducks. hmmmmm.

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  6. I think there is a lesson for all of us in this, we aren't the only ones trying to look like we know what we are doing!

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