I love this John. The third line, 'heads bent' adds an extra dimension to this haiku which really lifts it up...
I agree with Frank, John :)and this is a scene we often see, beautiful, but some sadness to it, wishes, devika
A contradiction...agreeing with Frank and seeing a sadness, but thats what I felt here, :)wishes, devika
excellent. once again, your blog fails to disappoint.
even flowers take on the countenance of their surroundings. i can see why this verse was the winner. beautiful.
it must be evening time; time for vespers as indicated by the flowers having bent, a serene picture sketched. much lovegillena
Powerful thought. _m
It is indeed a winner. Very well done!
I see why it won. :)
yes, very good
I do like this haiku!
Place and what has taken place - both make a new thing: a haiku thing.Best wishesRalf
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