i really like the juxtaposition of the fallen petal and the ant climbing the red mountain.
Only a haiku poet would notice such small detail - nice one John...
One thing for one being... quite another... for another. (being)Great one, John. _m
I agree with Frank...fine haiku, Johnwishes, devika
Great haiku John.
a grand little haikumuch lovegillena
It's amassing how many thoughts and feelings few tiny lines can provoke. Nice.
Ive been away for just a few days and ive missed so many...A great set, this one particularly
McDonald sanFantastic haiku!Creative, and Pleasant!Hidenori Hiruta
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