Tuesday, July 28, 2009

eller berries
baggit bricht
...speuggies' een




elder berries
bulging bright
...sparrows' eyes

5 comments:

  1. Good idea: the fruit's movement, the animal's motionlessness.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. This is interesting :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. lovely and universal!
    novelty in composition, too.

    With gratitude
    Hiruta

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  4. I like the visual link between the berries and the eyes, but also the sense that the sparrows have bright eyes at the thought of eating those berries.

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