Wednesday, July 15, 2009

hail watter -
the hameless chiel's
wattered-doon bree




torrents of rain -
the homeless man's
watered-down soup

4 comments:

  1. THIS IS SAD, though i appreciate the haiku moment, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. You are good at these John. You speak for those that poetry might overlook, and it's never about an agenda, it's just true observation.

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