Thursday, July 23, 2009

maws fechtin
the wund -
fedders fawin




gulls fighting
the wind -
feathers falling

7 comments:

  1. Just wonderful, John.

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  2. the wind has been on my mind these days too.

    such a clear image here.

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  3. A very clear powerful haiku John, I really enjoyed this one.

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  4. thats like a movie commentary

    Good haiku, John :)


    wishes,
    devika

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  5. A great little moment in little great words, again.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. a war between
    quills and feathers --
    ? - ?

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  7. Good one. It's like they are ripping up the wind, and in turn it's having a go at them.

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