tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post6198210434945586097..comments2024-03-21T04:00:09.881-07:00Comments on zen speug: John McDonaldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-48196192119102162582009-08-04T04:23:33.420-07:002009-08-04T04:23:33.420-07:00This is one of those 'don't breath or you&...This is one of those 'don't breath or you'll break it' haiku. Beautiful!jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-82338773718250123282009-07-15T08:25:06.648-07:002009-07-15T08:25:06.648-07:00you have a fine eye, John. what grace you have be...you have a fine eye, John. what grace you have been given to see the tenderness of life with such understanding.Laurie A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11835435551938917829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-76709275308379351332009-07-15T08:00:32.236-07:002009-07-15T08:00:32.236-07:00"...even the nano-weight of the petal... is f..."...even the nano-weight of the petal... is felt..." So true, Magyar!<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Angelikahaiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01004167617562345120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-7799957166270169042009-07-14T18:09:38.971-07:002009-07-14T18:09:38.971-07:00delicatedelicateEmma Dallowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762502184477362139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-69722610333219698952009-07-14T16:21:36.134-07:002009-07-14T16:21:36.134-07:00took me back to Basho's frog leap
much love
g...took me back to Basho's frog leap<br /><br />much love<br />gillenaGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-11375658730509605852009-07-14T15:57:51.788-07:002009-07-14T15:57:51.788-07:00The pool is a symbol for wealth and/or an erotic p...The pool is a symbol for wealth and/or an erotic promise. In your haiku it is just the surface for a big thing: human emotion. Very good, John.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />Ralf<br /><br />PS: The verification word at the moment is "stones". Sometimes I think these systems know what we think: why not throwing a pebble into this still pool and watching circles?Ralf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-30786766342069667582009-07-14T15:13:50.362-07:002009-07-14T15:13:50.362-07:00magicalmagicalDave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-80359795629257755112009-07-14T08:46:54.545-07:002009-07-14T08:46:54.545-07:00...even the nano-weight of the petal... is felt. F......even the nano-weight of the petal... is felt. Fine one John. _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-26697495193063825722009-07-14T06:53:34.231-07:002009-07-14T06:53:34.231-07:00Lovely John, one to read again and again.Lovely John, one to read again and again.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28810552.post-63432894144586193972009-07-14T06:12:03.834-07:002009-07-14T06:12:03.834-07:00the last line sent a chilly shiver in me!
God kn...the last line sent a chilly shiver in me! <br /><br />God knows why! <br />anyway, good haiku John :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com