Monday, August 03, 2009

muin atween the cluds -
a fite bawdrons
snuves ahint the fence




moon between the clouds -
a white cat
glides behind the fence

15 comments:

  1. ha! good one John :)
    white cats...sometimes they look like pieces of clouds on earth,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. this is the stage for the moon...fantastic mcdonald san

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  3. very nice indeed ... so atmospheric.

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  4. I love your Scottish Haiku! You know many words in Scottish is like Norwegian :-)) I love Scotland and Japan, and now a Scottish Haiku friend too. Well written Haiku I would say....you are a good writer.
    HAIKUroy

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  5. Hope you got my comments ?
    Anyway your relay a very good Haiku poet

    friend
    HAIKUroy

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  6. No counter-part, but a equation: not used very often, this one is very poetic.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. Great link between the images, although I'm not that partial to white cats, they always seem like a cut out gap where a black cat should have been.

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  8. Very nice haiku John...

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  9. great set... I liked the snail for cork one - brought a smile

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  10. interesting jutaposition

    much love
    gillena

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  11. Your haiku has poetic power.

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  12. I like this very much John.

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