Thursday, August 13, 2009

drave boats -
maws
ruggin the err apairt




herring boats -
gulls
tearing the air apart

7 comments:

  1. Perfect John. I can smell the salt air.

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  2. vivid

    much love
    gillena

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  3. The sound of the gulls - recorded in a perfect way. And the rhythmn follows the r in line one and three. I like that a lot.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. Yes, a very vivid image John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. very lively! mcdonald san

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  6. So vivid, as Gillena says. It's a wild scene!

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