Saturday, August 08, 2009

kestin'r breid
the swan wins tae'r -
doontoon Leda




casting her bread
the swan comes to her -
downtown Leda

5 comments:

  1. i'm afraid i am not getting this too well, John...perhaps others comments will help,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Oh, I like the reference to Greek mythology. Good subject matter for haiku!

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  3. Oh thanks Eema :)..now I have to get that character...I don't seem to remember,


    wishes,
    devika

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  4. familiar living creatures mcdonald san

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  5. Yes, had to look for Leda, too. But what I loved on first sight was "doontoon". Whouwh!

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