Friday, August 14, 2009

a train dirls ower
the airches - hameless
he drames anither life




a train rattles over
the arches - homeless
he dreams anither life

6 comments:

  1. not to have any dream...life may be quite a difference mcdonald san, I'm thinking...

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  2. i like the quality pathos in this set and the issue of ambivalence in the dream theme which raises the question do we also dream of another life

    much love
    gillena

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  3. nice poem, John
    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Anither? Is the dreamer dreaming in Scots? Great sounds of "r" in both haiku. Good work!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. the movement in this is stunning, John. the mood, perfect.

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