Tuesday, August 18, 2009

furst tryst -
mither's weir-pent
ower's plooks




first date -
mother's make-up
over his acne

7 comments:

  1. Lovely John. I like the 'rub' of caring enough about his appearance not to mind wearing his mother's make-up (or was the make-up the result of a goodbye kiss signifying a shift in relations?)
    I really enjoyed this, it made me stop and think.

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  2. Oh, I do remember ...

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. lovely... I like the idea of 'war paint' covering his 'plooks'

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  4. ha! Paul's comment makes sense :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. nice john, a mother would do anything, would she not ;)

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  6. oh dear, now i remember my freckles ...

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