Perfect John. I can smell the salt air.
The sound of the gulls - recorded in a perfect way. And the rhythmn follows the r in line one and three. I like that a lot.Best wishesRalf
Yes, a very vivid image John :)wishes, devika
very lively! mcdonald san
So vivid, as Gillena says. It's a wild scene!
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