Tuesday, January 25, 2011

weir-riven ceetie -
oot ower the flagpole
maw spreids'r fite weengs




war-torn city -
on top of the flagpole
gull spreads her white wings

4 comments:

  1. makes one look at the consequences of war....Good haiku, John...and good additions,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. war strips identity; very sad haiku

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  3. "war strips identity".... Can't say that, Gillena...No, Indian history says a different story,

    Ofcourse, the illiterate, the poor...the displaced -- are the more victimised....but the aim has always been to bring them to the mainstream...and it takes time,

    just had to share my thought, after Gillena's comment, John...thanks for the space,

    wishes,
    devika

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