Tuesday, January 11, 2011

throu the fooneral:
the soun o mizzlin frost
jynin the muckle burn




during the funeral:
the sound of melting ice
joining the great stream

5 comments:

  1. A joyful sound in the sadness.

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  2. Rich counterpoint. An image of cold and separation that also suggests change and, therefore, life.

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  3. death and melting awaying; two images assuading a change- a transition of sorts; much love

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  4. __Tears, join the stream, drop after drop. Today, so fitting, John. _m

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  5. like sunlight through the church windows

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