Oh! horrible...broken face...but a serving of curd can set it right, they say :)wishes, devika
you continue to surprise me John - you push this genre further than most... excellent
Oh!...Oh, and now I've seen Devika's comment and she starts with "Oh!" too.A good haiku!
Really well done, John!
A nice capture John. I agree with Dalloway, you push this genre further than most...
Another fine one John._m
well wrought 'broken face' - Ahamuch lovegillena
like it John, not the drink and the smashed bottle, but the image ;)
Great alliteration, wonderful sound: Both versions of this haiku are very present when I read them loud.Best wishesRalf
Oi. :-( last drops of beer lost forever
I always enjoy your 'drunk' haiku. You have such a good eye for spotting a striking image.
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