Saturday, June 06, 2009

on the clartie burn
swans
daizzlin




on the muddy stream
swans
dazzling

7 comments:

  1. Nice picture in words, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I love the contrast between "muddy" and "dazzling". A dazzling one indeed.

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  3. They can dazzle anywhere, eh?

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  4. I see their white on our mud.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. The swans in contrary to the muddy water, a visual concert. Fine on John. _m

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  6. What a contrast!

    I enjoyed it very much to read this good haiku!

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