very good - sounds cold (I like kist o whustles - far better sounding than organ)
Gasping, wheezing...breathing problems with all and sundry here...and now the organ too!!but i like the haiku, John :)wishes, devika
I love old organs- you don't see many of them around here anymore...
Wheeze is a great word for that. And sometimes I feel like this organ too. Interesting way of partnership. Very nice haiku.Best wishesRalf
A well captured moment...
Some of the congregation, too, I'll bet. By the way, if it's a weekday morning, that might be worth specifying. Although masses are offered at various times of day, I think "morning" may be regarded as the default mode. And, if it's Sunday, would "early mass" say a little more; I think "sunday" is also default mode.weekday Mass . . .early Mass . . .
well noticed Bill - it should have been earlyjohn
Wow! I like it (especially line 3)!