Tuesday, June 09, 2009

airlie Mass -
the kist o whustles
pechin




early Mass -
the organ
wheezing

8 comments:

  1. very good - sounds cold

    (I like kist o whustles - far better sounding than organ)

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  2. Gasping, wheezing...breathing problems with all and sundry here...and now the organ too!!

    but i like the haiku, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. I love old organs- you don't see many of them around here anymore...

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  4. Wheeze is a great word for that. And sometimes I feel like this organ too. Interesting way of partnership. Very nice haiku.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. A well captured moment...

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  6. Some of the congregation, too, I'll bet. By the way, if it's a weekday morning, that might be worth specifying. Although masses are offered at various times of day, I think "morning" may be regarded as the default mode. And, if it's Sunday, would "early mass" say a little more; I think "sunday" is also default mode.

    weekday Mass . . .

    early Mass . . .

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  7. well noticed Bill - it should have been early
    john

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  8. Wow!
    I like it (especially line 3)!

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