Friday, May 08, 2009

nicht weirs in -
craws retourin
tae the craw widdie




night approaches -
crows returning
to the crow wood

4 comments:

  1. a natural moment, nice John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. i always wondered where crows go at dusk.
    thank you for answering ;)

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  3. First idea: so what? Second was: "Driving home for Christmas." You hit the melody with line two and three.

    By the way: They sleep in a coniferous forest - very close to the local energy supplier, Polona.

    Good one, John.

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  4. The repetition of the word crow works well, a real sense of end of day homecoming.

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