Friday, May 22, 2009

in the nicht
a dug yowlin
a bleck dug




in the night
a dog barking
a black dog

2 comments:

  1. A good haiku! The repetition works so well!

    I tried a translation:

    In der Nacht -
    ein Hund jault einen
    schwarzen Hund an

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  2. Yes, like it very much! In my mind it is the sound first, and then there is his colour. Great, you're back, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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