Friday, May 01, 2009

beerial mornin -
a snell wund's
tirlt the gean flourish




funeral morning -
a bitter wind's stripped
the cherry blossom

12 comments:

  1. Exquisite, John.

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  2. I'm going to a funeral tomorrow morning. The feeling! Yes.

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  3. I know how it feels, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. this is very powerful... it is bitter

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  5. Good one. Just had to accompany a good acquaintance on his ultimate way.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. like the opposite imagery: cherry blossom vs. confetti and the fact that it is stripped from the trees - no room for spring here.

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  7. Emotionally charged...

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  8. Very powerful John.

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