Saturday, May 23, 2009

fireflaucht
jinkin doon the brae
fite gaits




lightning
zigzagging down the mountain
white goats

7 comments:

  1. Oh good you back; hope you had a nice trip
    Its bright and oh so sunny here in T&T now

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Oh many new ones..

    I love this country-side scene, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. nice- it was that way here tonight, too.

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  4. Very nice haiku John. I like the way this haiku can be read in two different ways...

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  5. I like zigzagging haiku.
    It is very understandable image.
    Thank you for sharing.

    sakuo.

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