Wednesday, April 22, 2009

fankilt bummer:
wund frae's weengs
shills ma fingers




trapped bumble-bee:
wind from its wings
chills my fingers

7 comments:

  1. a chilling image... hope it flew away freely

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  2. trying to catch it, John? :)

    Nice one,

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Nature as the intimate other. Well done, John.

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  4. I love a good bee haiku... (I have so many photos of bees - a strange and emerging interest of mine - I struggle to come up with fitting verse for each of them)

    fankilt bummer - I wish I had an excuse to use that line in a sentence

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  5. It wasn't there, but it was there.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. Precious moment. The littlest things can have a big impact.

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