Friday, April 17, 2009

stane
drapt i the dub -
muin wammles awa




stone
dropped in the pool -
moon wriggles away

11 comments:

  1. i love watching how moon regains itself after the ripples settle,

    nice one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. John! This is an instant classic! Right up there with Basho and his frog. Exceptional.

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  3. excellent, i love the touch of humour

    much love
    gillena

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  4. Great John. Nice use of the word wriggles...

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  5. yes, i like the light touch of haiku humour in this one also

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  6. ... after the -wammies- the moon comes back! Great one John! _m

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  7. but not
    for long
    calm returns

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