Saturday, April 25, 2009

sweirt watter -
sauch's sheddae
thair an yit no thair




lazy river -
willow's shadow
there and yet not there

8 comments:

  1. Oh I like that. The last two lines have a really lazy feeling about them. Well written!

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  2. this one has a lovely, and yes lazy, feel to it

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  3. Good sense of observation, John. :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Shadows are so illusory - a nicely structured haiku John...

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  5. love this one, too...

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  6. Great image. I smell the air over there. Your willow will stay alive.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. This is a nice one John. Sounds like a quiet place to visit.

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