Oh I like that. The last two lines have a really lazy feeling about them. Well written!
this one has a lovely, and yes lazy, feel to it
Good sense of observation, John. :)wishes, devika
Shadows are so illusory - a nicely structured haiku John...
love this one, too...
Great image. I smell the air over there. Your willow will stay alive.Best wishesRalf
This is a nice one John. Sounds like a quiet place to visit.
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