argument, spikes..John, whats happening?hope its an imaginative mind at work! :)wishes, devika
the energy to argue over waste ground is not good, wasteful at the best, togethernes should be on the agenda.
I like unusual subjects in haiku... the third line works well
Nice approach - it could be people, animals, or just the thistles, and there is something romantic about the phrase 'waste ground'.
ouch, John!!! very skillfully put together; argument/thistle nice juxtaposition and the wasteland just completes and resonates so wellmuch lovegillena
a powerful image
One of those echoes of the human in the natural. Or is it the other way around?
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