Wednesday, November 12, 2008

stour o's shock
ower -
a stilt yirdin'm




storm of his stroke
over -
a crutch earthing him

8 comments:

  1. this is terrifying to me
    i see death here..no, NO!

    wishes!
    devika

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  2. this one sure has impact.

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  3. "earthing" is a very rich word here.

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  4. A very powerful poem John

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  5. intensely packed imagery & emotion:-)

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  6. This is powerful and striking. A great way of viewing the events.

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