Monday, November 03, 2008

indian simmer -
cowpt on the brod
a poke o leemons




indian summer -
spilled on the table
a bag of lemons

7 comments:

  1. A vivid picture. A little like an abstract painting.

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  2. like this one, jem's comment hits the nail here, and also like the one about the cat's cushion which is also a strong image

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  3. Very good. I especially like "spilled."

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