Thursday, November 27, 2008

amang the faw'n aipples
a faw'n simmer-
hoose




among the fallen apples
a fallen summer-
house

6 comments:

  1. hmm.. literally speaking this calls for some serious working in Spring.

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  2. John, I see a bird's nest... among the fallen apples.
    _m

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  3. Summer resorts are the ones that are often reconstructed :)

    loved the romantic overtone to it, John..

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Oh, thats good, the pause over to the last line threw me for a moment, but then I caught up.

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