Sunday, September 28, 2008

the auld kipple
stravaig the olive plantin -
arthritic sheddaes




the old couple
wander the olive grove -
arthritic shadows
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5 comments:

  1. polona1:06 PM

    great image

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  2. J. Andrew Lockhart1:13 PM

    I can relate to this one :)

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  3. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)6:35 AM

    very good!

    line 3 is a real surprise, I "arthritic shadows", a very good poetic idea!

    the old age of the couple, of the olive trees, a fascinating image

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  4. Janet8:43 PM

    Nice! I like it.

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  5. magiceye12:20 AM

    terrific!

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