Saturday, September 27, 2008

pouin lamb's tongues
she fumes
the hail gairden




pulling mint
she perfumes
the whole garden

4 comments:

  1. wonderful - i can see and smell this

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  2. Super - I'm trying to work other senses into my writing as sometimes I forget to. This is a great lesson in how to do it well.

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