Monday, September 15, 2008

equal-aqual
on the telephone weer:
craw yatterin




balancing
on the telephone wire:
crow chattering

7 comments:

  1. brilliant. :) great use of chatter.

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  2. A happy hour;
    free phone calls
    for any craw!


    That word yattering! In finnish it is jaaritella... (y sounds as j in Finnish)

    In Finnish your haiku is something like this:

    Tasapainoillen
    puhelinlangoilla
    varis jaarittelee

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  3. And for J. Andrew: she!?

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  4. ps 3:

    http://juhanitikkanen.blogspot.com/2008/09/john-mcdonald.html

    16.9.2008

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  5. Well worded - made me smile!

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