Wednesday, September 10, 2008

he pynts oot the aipples
tae's gran-bairn
...reid chaftit




he points out the apples
to his grandchild
...red cheeked

4 comments:

  1. I like the double meaning of line 3 very much!

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  2. Great connection - made me smile.

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  3. agreed Angelika, maybe even triple meaning: red cheeked apples, gramps or the boy? as crisp as fall.

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