Wednesday, September 10, 2008

he pynts oot the aipples
tae's gran-bairn
...reid chaftit




he points out the apples
to his grandchild
...red cheeked
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4 comments:

  1. Masago8:35 PM

    Cute.

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  2. haiku-shelf10:54 PM

    I like the double meaning of line 3 very much!

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  3. jem4:42 AM

    Great connection - made me smile.

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  4. Janet8:46 AM

    agreed Angelika, maybe even triple meaning: red cheeked apples, gramps or the boy? as crisp as fall.

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