Sunday, October 28, 2007

mids the burdsang
craw twangs sumthin's intimmers
oot frae the taur




amidst the birdsong
crow twangs something's intestines
out from the tar

5 comments:

  1. so it goes...
    good one!

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  2. eww, gross.
    but perfect wording.

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  3. Cool image. Use of "twang" is new to me but makes sense.

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  4. Gorey but fantastic. One must write about the dark as well as the bright - and you handle both extremes so well!

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