Friday, October 05, 2007

anither yirdin -
sin blinters on the spaiks
o a birlin trinnle




another funeral -
sun glitters on the spokes
of a turning wheel

6 comments:

  1. beautiful and somehow soothing in its poignancy (if that makes any sense)

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  2. This is a good haiku.

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  3. Lots of layers of thought in this. Very profound.

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  4. beautiful! funny, I was thinking of writing one today about a funeral that I didn't go to.

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  5. Powerful image...

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