Wednesday, October 03, 2007

the hern gants
its neb chizorin the err -
leaves faw aroon'm




the heron yawns
its beak scissoring the air -
leaves fall around him

4 comments:

  1. I can see this, in fact I saw it today here down under. :-)

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  2. great image, great feeling

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  3. Very good - it all ties together so well. I get an almost surreal image from it too - beak as blade, snipping apart his surroundings. Great.

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