Wednesday, December 13, 2006

syncopatit
the sparks
throuch ma laiky ruif




syncopated
the raindrops
through my leaky roof
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5 comments:

  1. Borut9:57 AM

    Really like this one, like the old masters!

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  2. polona10:07 AM

    leaky roof as a musical instrument?
    nice!

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  3. J. Andrew Lockhart5:12 PM

    I really like this -- perfect word

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  4. Sandy7:17 AM

    Hi, John, when I read the first version of your haiku, I thought, huh? LOL Then I read the second and went, ahhhh.

    Very well done.

    S

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  5. Anonymous6:25 AM

    Ragtime accompaniment!

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