Saturday, December 09, 2006

the laddie's dowie sang -
a hert-shaped leaf
blaws tae ma feet




the boy's sad song -
a heart-shaped leaf
blows to my feet
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5 comments:

  1. polona1:02 PM

    i love this one!

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  2. Anonymous2:43 AM

    Not your soul, but your legs bruised?
    Nice haiku!

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  3. J. Andrew Lockhart7:55 PM

    THis is beautiful!

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  4. Anonymous8:43 PM

    Very nice. *laughing at Tikkis' comments*

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  5. Borut8:50 AM

    I read it as 'powerful words have the power to shape our hearts!? POoerful!

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