Wednesday, December 13, 2006

the advent caunle
brenns awa anither day
the lowe chitters




the advent candle
burns away another day
the flame shivers
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous3:36 AM

    Nice one, John. Should "anither" in the English version of this poem (i.e. the bottom one) be "another"?

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  2. John McDonald3:50 AM

    thanks sb I know I can depend on you it's the trouble of thinking in two languages that causes it thanks again
    john

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  3. polona10:02 AM

    yes, very nice.

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  4. Anonymous6:22 AM

    Yes, I like this too.

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