Saturday, December 02, 2006

peerie speuggie
frae brainch tae brainch
shooglin the tree




tiny sparrow
from branch to branch
shaking the tree

3 comments:

  1. love this one!
    your comments were disabled for a while?

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  2. Anonymous1:55 AM

    I agree with Polona. Very good.

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  3. Yes, I agree too.
    If I may offer a suggestion, "a tiny sparrow" sounds good to my ears.

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