Wednesday, October 11, 2006

toon plainstanes
aneath ilka tree
leaves tae dump throuch




city pavements
beneath every tree
leaves to kick through

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  3. I just experienced that yesterday and have been wondering if it could be haiku'ed. You've done it!

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  4. perfect -- makes me want to go out and kick some now! (kind of late for that, thought) :)

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