Thursday, October 26, 2006

the roddens
fawin agane this year
faw ontae's mool




the rowan berries
falling again this year
fall onto his grave

4 comments:

  1. poignant!
    i would consider omitting "fall" in L3

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  2. thanks for the observation polona but I feel the second fall in L3 indicates: my friend has died since! last year without it I feel they would be simply falling again as they have done every year on to his grave,which is not the case
    john

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  3. Anonymous4:08 PM

    lovely image.

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  4. thanks for the explanation, john.

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