poignant!i would consider omitting "fall" in L3
thanks for the observation polona but I feel the second fall in L3 indicates: my friend has died since! last year without it I feel they would be simply falling again as they have done every year on to his grave,which is not the casejohn
lovely image.
thanks for the explanation, john.
poignant!
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thanks for the observation polona but I feel the second fall in L3 indicates: my friend has died since! last year without it I feel they would be simply falling again as they have done every year on to his grave,which is not the case
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lovely image.
ReplyDeletethanks for the explanation, john.
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