Tuesday, November 02, 2010

heavin
frae the perk bink
the hameless chiel castin leaves




rising
from the park bench
the homeless man shedding leaves

10 comments:

  1. A fine haiku, John...

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  2. A beauty, John. And congratulations on you first place in the Caribbean Kigo Kukai. You got my vote.

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  3. not only the trees; enjoyed your wit

    much love
    gillena

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  4. Yes, this brought a smile, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. Memorable, John. _m

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  6. First of all: my congrats to your first place in ckk 18 - great competition with a photo finish. But what makes me really proud is to know a haijin who is not flying high after this success but having his eyes in these corners of our world where a roof and a bed are luxury. Thanks for that, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. a good haiku

    an interesting line 3

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  8. a haiku with a sharp edge, well done John

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  9. Superb John. What a wonderful picture you have painted here.

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