Wednesday, November 17, 2010

hairst's towl...
sheuch fou o leaves
airteries claggin




autumn's toll...
drains full of leaves
arteries clogging

11 comments:

  1. this is where the American word 'fall' is tempting - something like 'after the fall' (but probably not exactly that)
    the 2nd 3rd lines are brill.

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  2. A great set, John. I too like the 2nd and 3rd lines very much...

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  3. Tormento necessário. Natureza vive...

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  4. Sometimes you can almost feel them. Good one.

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  5. Just love 'sheuch' sound.

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  6. arteries clogging; dosent sound too good to me, take care of yourself

    much love
    gillena

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  7. Nice one. I see what Poet in Residence is driving at.

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  8. very effective jux, as always...hope this isn't about your heath...

    wishes,
    devika

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  9. In my Autumn...

    Nice paralell, John! _m

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  10. well done, John. Happy birthday!

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  11. __John... I was unaware of your Birthday, but now that I am, Cheers!

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