Monday, November 15, 2010

furst freest -
warslin dugs
in a trinnlin clud o braith


first frost -
wrestling dogs
in a rolling cloud of breath

10 comments:

  1. ha! :)

    first fog
    watching
    my breath, diffusing

    No fog yet here, just a thought, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. och aye a decent brace!
    gwilym

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  3. Well seen, John! Dog-Fog. _m

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  4. Can feel the heat in the cold here.

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  5. like watching a movie; enjoyed this one John

    much love
    gillena

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  6. excellent haiku John. I can hear it

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  7. An intriguing set, John...

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