Saturday, December 05, 2009

furst tae wauken:
liggin hearkenin
tae'r drame




first to waken:
lying listening
to her dream

14 comments:

  1. nice....Very zen-like, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Enjoyed the emotions of love in the haiku.

    ~ http://artcomet.blogspot.com

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  3. Very interesting...

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  4. to know her is to love here even more -
    very interesting lines John.

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  5. A lovely haiku about a special moment...

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  6. threshold moment.

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  7. Romantic. Sweet is the touch without any hands.

    Beautiful.
    T

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  8. Oh, this is wonderful. To me, it could be the man who is watching his woman. Or it is the woman herself who now has got some worthy moments to listen to her inside.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  9. ...and oooo, I know it happens. Comfortable! _m

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  10. very romantic

    much love
    gillena

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  11. Beautiful. A real sense of love in this. They could be anyone, any age, anywhere.

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  12. love the bridge and the wakeful transition between conscious and the unconscious

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