Sunday, December 20, 2009

bath-watter gurlin
doon the jaw-hole -
the hoose less lanely




bath-water gurgling
down the plug-hole -
the house less lonely

7 comments:

  1. That 'sounds' good! :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Been there. Very poignant indeed!

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  3. An astute observation.

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  4. love the Scots version of this!

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  5. We warmed up our sauna just yesterday, from there a three-liner:

    warm steam
    from the sauna-stove --
    an excited bath whisk

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